The best part of my news article I think is my interview and information. Also, as Mr. Manno’s comments,I have many information and news value. Those news values and information all come from the interviews with Mr. Eaton and Ms. Raina(Thanks to Mr. Eaton and Ms. Raina for their time to have those interviews with me.)
And according to Mr. Manno’s comments, I need to improve my news article’s formatting and structure. A good and clear organization can help my readers to understand my news article better. That’s also my goal for writing such an article. I want people to know what a principal like Mr. Eaton exactly do every day for his work life so that I can achieve my goal. Also, putting my news articles into paragraph can help to distinguish different story and values.
In brief, I really did well about my interviews and news values. But I need to organize my article to let it become more neatly.
And according to Mr. Manno’s comments, I need to improve my news article’s formatting and structure. A good and clear organization can help my readers to understand my news article better. That’s also my goal for writing such an article. I want people to know what a principal like Mr. Eaton exactly do every day for his work life so that I can achieve my goal. Also, putting my news articles into paragraph can help to distinguish different story and values.
In brief, I really did well about my interviews and news values. But I need to organize my article to let it become more neatly.