The best part of my news article I think is my interview and information. Also, as Mr. Manno’s comments,I have many information and news value. Those news values and information all come from the interviews with Mr. Eaton and Ms. Raina(Thanks to Mr. Eaton and Ms. Raina for their time to have those interviews with me.)

And according to Mr. Manno’s comments, I need to improve my news article’s formatting and structure. A good and clear organization can help my readers to understand my news article better. That’s also my goal for writing such an article. I want people to know what a principal like Mr. Eaton exactly do every day for his work life so that I can achieve my goal. Also, putting my news articles into paragraph can help to distinguish different story and values.

In brief, I really did well about my interviews and news values. But I need to organize my article to let it become more neatly.

 
 
Artemis is represent the  cruelty.

Ares

10/13/2013

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Topic: Why the god Eris likes to throw the golden apple everywhere?
 
@Shanghai China
This English assignment is for the English Course on 9/28/2013,Sday,Block 4 given by Mr.Manno.

First, to answer’ What did you like about the Journalism unit?’

The answer must be the imaginary news article part!!!! That’s amazing! Well, the reason why I think must be that I like to create something interesting, I like fiction and I think I’m good at imaging things. When I was writing that article, I felt free. And I only used about 1 hour to finish that. It’s fantastic to write such an article.

The second question is tricky-‘ What didn’t you like?’

I have to say that finding some news values from my beat-school administration is really hard for me. This beat doesn’t like other beats such as gossip or canteen. It’s easy to find some interesting things and fun facts from the interview. But mostly, the school administration’s events are serious and formal. From the interview with the principal Mr. Eaton he also said that he couldn’t remember something really funny in his work life.

That’s why I dislike it.

What did I learn?

Since I’ve never written something like this before, of course, I learned a lot from this unit. I’ve learned that how to write a news article without any personal opinion. Though it’s really hard to do so at the very beginning. Thanks to Mr. Manno that he taught me how to do so. Mr. Manno also taught me how to use proper words in an news article such as we cannot use ‘things’ ‘something’ and any oral words. That’s not formal and also not clear. Readers need to read a clear informational news article.

Another essential thing I learned is how to structure a news article, what do a news article need. A clear structured article can help reader to receive information better.

This project also improved my interview skill. I also put my public speaking skills into my interviews. That’s really fun to conduct an interview with other people! Thanks to Mr. Eaton and Mr. Raina for their time to have interviews with me!